DW Ch11 P12
Posted on February 11, 2019 by Lepus Marj

Valentine's Day is this week, so I made page 10 into a card. Use it responsibly.

5 thoughts on “DW Ch11 P12”

  1. knowvoid

    I love this it has the thoughts of everyone in the audience conveyed in a way that doesn’t break the fourth wall while realising their limited options. yay I was here earliest!!!

    1. Lepus Marj

      Thanks for the compliment. Only half of this page was part of the original draft. I didn’t want too much exposition, but I ended up adding the rest because I thought the characters were under-reacting to the situation. Glad to know the choice paid off.

  2. zophah

    “Curse your sudden, but inevitable, betrayal!”

    1. Lepus Marj

      “Your gradual but inevitable betrayal” doesn’t have quite the same ring to it.

  3. Robert

    LOL second panel.

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