DW Ch7 P29
Posted on September 7, 2015 by Lepus Marj

In my drafts, this fight looks more like a draw, but in the final product, Lyric is clearly at an advantage. She hasn't won yet, but Cloaker asking her to "just die already" is a little presumptuous.

2 thoughts on “DW Ch7 P29”

  1. Ed8

    Magic-wise I would think Lyric could kick Cloaker’s butt, but it appears they’ve ditched the magic and he’s losing to a one-armed person in a physical altercation – that’s just embarrassing for him. Then again, if that scorpion-tail works like a real one, maybe he’s not losing at all as Lyric appears to be about to get stung?

  2. Jaya Lakshmi

    Lyric needs to be quicker on her feet.

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